Some of us love surprises. Others would be mortified if
their friends threw them a surprise birthday party. Regardless of your stance,
however, you can’t deny that the element of suspense plays an important role in
our lives. Few things peak our interest like the thrill of the unknown.
Likewise, few things draw readers into a story faster than
suspense. Whether you write mystery, thriller, supernatural, or fantasy, no
genre is untouched by some element of suspense. Below are five simple tips that
can help you craft hair-raising, page-turning apprehension.
1. The Power of
Imagination and the Unknown
Growing up, our imaginations were almost always active. We
were very good at “pretending” to be things we weren’t and played with our
imaginary friends. However, this imaginative power could also take the form of
monsters and other less favorable creatures that lived in our closets at night. Even as adults, several years later, an unexpected bump in the night can send
our hearts racing.
This natural fear of the unknown is basic suspense at its
finest. If you hear something strange, or catch a fleeting glimpse of a shadow,
your mind instantly strives to discover its origin (and often comes up with
several frightening options in the process). The versatile imagination that you
developed as a child continues to feed your brain with possible, and often
far-fetched, answers to the unknown things around you.
When you write suspense, use the power of the unknown.
Shadows aren’t frightening if you reveal what is casting them. If something, or
someone, is stalking your main character, for example, don’t reveal who or what
it is. Keep your readers in the dark. Suspense is only suspense until you know
the source of it. Once you reveal the source of the suspense to your readers,
it ceases to be suspense. At this point, it may take another form—horror,
relief, or perhaps even a new form of suspense—but the original suspense that
you built up will have dissipated.
2. Fulfill your
Promises
Sometimes suspense is not as literal as a “bump in the
night.” Sometimes it’s a long-term unknown.
In The Scarlet Letter,
for example, a sort of long-term suspense runs throughout the length of the
novel: will Dimmesdale be found guilty of adultery? Will Chillingworth find out
Dimmesdale is guilty? A lot of this suspense stems from the fact that
Chillingworth has sworn to find his adulterous wife’s partner-in-crime. The
author has promised the reader that Chillingworth is set on finding the truth,
and his vengeful nature could cause several consequences for Dimmesdale, should
he be found out. Once the author makes a connection between Chillingworth’s
desire for revenge and Dimmesdale’s guilt, the reader is given a promise of
ominous things to come. The result: long-term, page-turning suspense.
To create effective, long-term suspense, it is important to
make promises to your readers. But it is even more important to fulfill those promises in a more-than-satisfactory
manner.
For example, if you promise your readers that your villain
is a master thief who is willing to go to any length to procure treasure, then
you had best fulfill that promise. Put him in the middle of his greatest heist.
Show off his desperation—or his ruthlessness—in getting past all those who
stand in his way.
A promise isn’t usually something that you alright state to
your reader. It is something that you hint at through your plot, characters,
and dialogue. Most importantly, though, don’t let your readers down. Fulfill
their expectations and exceed them if you can. It will keep them coming back
for more, and you will have gained their respect for having their best
interests in mind.
3. Lead, then
Mislead, then Lead Again
How many times have you read or watched a scene where one
character is hiding from another?
Usually, it goes something like this:
(1) Character A hides behind something as Character B comes
in looking for them.
(2) Character A holds their breath and freezes as Character
B paces around the room.
(3) Character B freezes and regards Character A’s hiding
spot.
(4) Character A prepares to panic, but just as the tension
is about to break Character B decides there is nothing of interest and moves
on.
(5) At this point, Character A may be in the clear, but
oftentimes Character B will double back and discover Character A’s hiding place
after all.
Sound familiar? This creepy hide-and-seek game is an
oft-used scene of classic suspense. But what I want you to notice in this
example is not the literal “hide-and-seek” match, but the principle that is at
work here. The Lead-Mislead-Lead (or MLM) principle says that keeping your
readers guessing is the key to golden suspense. Like a teeter-totter, this
concept reels unsteadily between one outcome and another. This leaves your
reader cringing as the balance tips first one way, and then another, uncertain
which outcome will occur.
Of course, the “hide-and-seek” example represents this
principle at its most basic level. A great example of this concept occurs in
the film The Lord of the Rings: The
Return of the King. The battle for Minas Tirith wages relentlessly
back-and-forth: Mordor attacks the city, the city retaliates, Rohan arrives to
reinforce the city, an army of Mumakil arrive to reinforce Mordor, an army of
undead warriors arrive to reinforce the city, etc. The battle becomes a
heart-stopping balance where evil prevails one moment and good triumphs the
next. This uncertainty creates tremendous suspense, which keeps the viewers
tuned in to the on-screen action.
4. Alternate Between
Short and Long Sentences
Sentence length is key to setting a suspenseful mood.
Shorter sentences are generally used to create quick images that convey action,
fear, or sensory input. Longer sentences can convey moments of false calm,
contemplation, or uncertainty. To get the most power out of your suspenseful
moment, it’s important to alternate between these two sentence types. Here is
an example:
Elena forced her
shaking limbs to be still. Hidden beneath the table in the deserted training
room, every breath sounded like a geyser rushing from her lungs.
A heavy foot creaked against the floor. Closer
now. Another step. Another. She could hear the rattled breathing of her foe as
it prowled the grounds, searching.
Silence.
She locked her eyes
shut. The creature sniffed for her scent. One more step and its claws would
find her.
5. Focus on the
Senses
Think back to a time when you felt you were being watched.
Maybe something startled you. Maybe you were extra paranoid because you were
alone. Relive that moment. What did you focus on visually? Your attention likely
shifted from shadows to low foliage or other places where something could hide
unnoticed. What startled you? It may have been leaves scraping on the sidewalk,
the scurry of a small animal, the shadow of a bird flying overhead, or
something else.
Regardless of the circumstance, looking back at your own
tense moment, you will realize just how perceptive your senses became. The fear
of the unknown likely triggered your flight-or-fight response, which enhanced
your vision, hearing, and overall sensitivity.
When you write in-the-moment suspense, especially from a
first-person viewpoint, pay close attention to what your character is sensing. All of your character’s senses
should be sharpened by the uncertainty of the moment. Be sure to hone in on
those and weave them into your scene as necessary. These details will add to
the realism and credibility of your suspense.
The Best Advice? Read,
View, and Practice!
The best advice I can give anyone who wants to write
suspense is to saturate yourself with suspense. Try a variety of mediums. Pick
up the latest thriller from a popular author. Watch an old “who-dun-it.” Play a
first-person video game like Slenderman.
Listen to suspenseful sound effects and music. Recall a personal experience
that triggered your flight-or-fight response and put it into words.
And, most importantly, practice. Write, edit, rewrite,
repeat.
And keep an eye on the shadows.
Very cool post. ^ ^ I've never read one quite like it. Good show. I love suspense.
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